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Toefl essay - stress are relieved by people by reading, gardening, exercising.



sandipsinh 37 / 88  
Mar 25, 2014   #1
PROPEL HAVE DIFFERENT WAY OF ESCAPING THE STRESS AND DIFFICULTIES OF MODERN LIFE.SOME READ, SOME EXERCISE; OTHERS WORK IN THE GRADEN WHAT DO YOU THINK IS THE BEST WAY OF REDUCeING THE STRESS? USE SPECIFIC DETAILS AND EXAMPLES IN YOUR ANWSERS.

Stress has become one of the inevitable disease and it is suffered by humans in their life due to many professional, social, and personal reasons. Due to stress people develop man other diseases and unhealthy habits. Today's competitive world has become one of the major reason of stress, nevertheless people seek their way to calm their stress by reading books, by exercising or by working in the garden. I generally take breaks to read book for relaxing myself.

Whenever I visit a library or book stores, but it gets very difficult for me to find perfect book for myself due to the availability of wide range of books. However, I generally prefer to read non - fiction books to get relief from my stress because they are more factual and realistic. These books address enormous matter that sometime serve us solutions for our problems. Biographies are usually about the distinct phrase of person's life. Currently, I am reading autobiography of Aneri Agassi, who is one of the prominent tennis players. He has explained the predicaments he had to go through to earn the title of best tennis player of the world. He has depicted a lot about his childhood life till last tennis match he played. This book gave me hope that I can also get triumph.

It is very well said that "books are men's best friend", many time in life we encounter problem that we cannot share with anybody but urge of getting rid of it or soothing it troubles us. In such scenario I read books that can guide me or make me feel better about the life I am living. I was disappointed and frustrated to think why I have to compromise my fun time and toil hard even on special occasions and eves, when others enjoy. But when I read book "who will cry when you die" I realized nothing comes to anybody easily. Hard work always pay well. Books not only help relieve my stress but boost my enthusiasm. And it also satisfies my need of gaining knowledge.

All - embracing books has proven inexpensive medicine for my stress. It keep me connected with the reality of the world and help me invest my time in good source of entertainment rather than gossip with people to reduce my strain.

dumi 1 / 6793  
Mar 26, 2014   #2
one of the inevitable disease

...one of the inevitable diseases ... it's always - " one of the many"

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ramshah 11 / 27  
Mar 26, 2014   #3
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