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Students in Canada and the US by country of origin: Table graph



Kany2711 5 / 9  
Jun 11, 2025   #1
Title: The tables show how many international students studies in Canada and the United States by country of origin.
The table compares how many traditional students from four different countries are China,USA, India, Canada, to Canada, and USA to study over a period of one year starting from 2002. Overall, every country saw an increase in the total international students over the given period. In addition, the highest figure was seen the number of thee countries students in Canada while the figure of three countries students in USA recorded the significant increase.
In 2002, Canada welcomed 5,400 Chinese students, which increased by 45% in 2003 and it was 39% higher than the number of students in USA from the starting year of 110,000 to 116,600 oven a period of one year. The figure of Indian learners was gradually in 2003, which rose by 2,835 in Canada, and the growth of Indian learners had 35% from last year, while the proportion of Indian learners dropped from 200,000 to 182,000, it means slightly by 9% of a year.
The other two countries witnessed the increase rate of students. Finally, the number of American students had five thousands people went to the schools of Canada country in 2002, while the number of the exchange students in the USA schools took up more than twenty-six thousands learners compared with the Canada schools. One year later, Canada country added four hundreds - fifty students, it went up by 9% of people, and this percentage more than the USA country was 3% of people. Therefore, the USA country grew by 33,170, which added 2,170 students compared to the last year. The total of two countries have a significant difference in the number of students. Although, the amount of American students was 581,600 of people higher than the Canadian students - it had 59,8700 learners in 2002, but the changed percentage of Canadian learners was 17% more than the USA schools by 15% of students, because the the number of Canadian schools was increased by 70,004 learners, but the USA schools was rose only 592,230 students in 2003.


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Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15921  
Jun 12, 2025   #2
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