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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did afterleaving college in 2008.

The two bar charts compare data on different in the amount of UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

In general, the number of UK graduate and postgraduate students who follow further study are highest at other options of excluding full-time work, the number of graduate students reached 29.665 students and the number of postgraduate students reached 2.725 students. Both of numbers are the most significant destination in England.

More specifically, the number of UK postgraduate students who took on part-time work is reached 2.535 students. It is less than the number of UK graduate students that showed 17.735 students. The number of UK graduate students or UK postgraduate students who did voluntary work is not too much, only 3.500 of the number of postgraduate students and 345 students from the amount of UK graduate students and then unemployment of graduate and postgraduate in 2008 reached the number of 16.235 people from the UK graduate students and 1.625 people from the UK postgraduate students.

## Graduated and non graduated students seeking work

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did afterleaving college in 2008.

The two bar charts compare data on different in the amount of UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

In general, the number of UK graduate and postgraduate students who follow further study are highest at other options of excluding full-time work, the number of graduate students reached 29.665 students and the number of postgraduate students reached 2.725 students. Both of numbers are the most significant destination in England.

More specifically, the number of UK postgraduate students who took on part-time work is reached 2.535 students. It is less than the number of UK graduate students that showed 17.735 students. The number of UK graduate students or UK postgraduate students who did voluntary work is not too much, only 3.500 of the number of postgraduate students and 345 students from the amount of UK graduate students and then unemployment of graduate and postgraduate in 2008 reached the number of 16.235 people from the UK graduate students and 1.625 people from the UK postgraduate students.