Students prefer to be volunteer instead of working. Pros and cons

volunteering instead of working

Nowadays the students interests increase daybyday. And they separate to different sides. Some of them are interested in how can I save world. The reason for thinking this the Earth face to face changing environment, pollution etc. And just people can cancel it. That's why many students understand it and prefer to be volunteer. But dose it come benefit for their own life?

There are some advantages. One of the main positive sides is to be sociable.
During your entire life to be communicated is eccellent. Because thanks to it you are encouraged. It also affects to your work life. Secondly, you help people and specifically you help world. Thirdly, you spend better time in volunteer club. It counts good activity.

On the other hand, they cannot earn money to make a living. And it should make their life a little difficult. Because in this life the money is counted everything.

In my view, recently, the people don't attention how world change. And they think the world always exists. But it changes. And this is fact, the students should be volunteer.

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