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Studying through a computer or studying in school (what students prefer)



jerry 17 / 10  
Sep 22, 2008   #1
Thank for your very detailed explanations!

Oh! Class assignments are bringing me down =.=, but I still keep writing...^^

Here is today essay

Which would you prefer? Studying though computer or studying in school

When it comes to the idea of study method, many people believe some more advanced ways like studying through computer are better; I personally think that it is better to study traditionally - study in school with friends.

The most important factor that influences my stance is the study interaction. When studying through computer, a person usually interact with only a single other person - his or her tutor. To study well, a student needs to discuss with not only the teacher but also the other students because the teacher cannot always provide the optimal solution to a problem, or always have the right advice; the student needs his or her classmates, who may have a better, even far better, way to overcome problems the student has faced. I myself have faced this situation. My grade 9 chemistry teacher had a teaching method that I could not follow. When I was frustrated because of my chemistry knowledge and the final test were coming, no one but my friends helped me to improve my knowledge, in a way that I thought is more understandable than any teachers' teaching methods.

Secondly, I think that studying ...

EF_Team5 - / 1583  
Sep 22, 2008   #2
Keep your head up!

"When it comes to the idea of studying methods , many people believe some more advanced ways like studying through computers are better; I personally think that it is better to study traditionally - in school with friends.

The most important factor that influences my stance is interaction. When studying through a computer, a person usually interacts with only a single other person - his or her tutor. T

When I was frustrated because of my chemistry knowledge and the final test were coming, no one but my friends helped me to improve my knowledge, in a way that I thought is more understandable than any teachers' teaching methods. Nice example.

Secondly, I think that studying should not only include some academic subjects but also how to behave in society - the veritable society, not the virtual society like study through computer with internet. While not studying academic classes, friends can us some other useful things like how to behave properly. It is so tedious to face to face with nothing but the computer screen while the outside world is just wonderful with many great friends who can teach us how to live properly in this harsh and competitive society. We definitely cannot study the living experience without seeing the real world but by interact with some person through the computer. We all can see that this vicarious way of learning experiences is not as good as the way of real interaction.

Our world is wonderful, and it is waiting for our explorations. Just the notion of studying through the computer and not meeting any real people make me have the intermediate decision of studying in the traditional way - going to school."

You're getting better!

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