Successful sports professionals - international reputation of the nation role

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Successful sports professionals earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think its fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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World of sports is a million dollar industry. Players of various games like soccer and cricket are highly payed and they earn immense name and fame while compared with doctors, engineers and defense personells. Two different opinions about this fact will be discussed in following paragraphs before a final conclusion is made.

On the one hand people believe that figures in various fields are people who earn reputation for their home nation in the field of sports, so they deserve the high rewards. Added to this, various sports teams have ti commonly visit to tournaments which are being organised away from their motherland,so they are often away from theie friends and families. Their,this sacrifice, often builds and strengthens the international affairs. Therefore in these terms their higher income level is fully justified.

On the other hand, some people feel that other important professionals like medical professionals, army recruits, police officers,etc. are unfairly less paid. Although, these occupations have harder duties and they serve country and humanity day and night. So, they deserve more respect and reputation in the society as compared to sports or film superstars.

Finally, in my perspect though sports stars play a big role in building an international reputation of the nation, but other professionals also play a role to serve the motherland and its natives, so the pay scale should be equal for all of these.

You should elaborate on this part. If you think these situations are too hard for athletes, you should talk more about these difficulties. Why are they difficult? Do they negatively impact professional sportsmen?



this statement is too short and it is not enough for supporting the topic sentence. Why do you think these duties are harder? talk more about them and compare them with what athletes do. Are they more important? Why?


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certain high schools require students to learn foreign language while other let students learn subjects of their choice.which policy do you support?

schools are playing very big role to make a students carrier.school is temple where child learn lots of things about their carrier and only school build's up a students entire life from the age of first to till university level.Apart from parents students spend their most of time in school so schools let them introduce to sports ,study,social activities, and daily cultural life.

To begin with,i m not in favor that school's teach foreign language's to their students .As foreign language only uses in abroad not in their own country. There are so many countries in this world so schools cant put more efforts to teach all those languages in school.students has to learn limited subjects according to stranded of their class.If class standard is not appropriate with students mind level and capacity of handling the load of too much study.students can be mentally upset or may be they leave their studies and try to engage with something else like start finding any small scale of work.If it happens then most of students will be unemployed and their will be less development in that country.As development is up to date so country has to hire employees from other countries due to some possible circumstances.people has to sick so need doctors,government need engineers for mechanic work etc.

however, if schools teach only subjects which are chosen by themselves,that would be better for students. students mind is immature so if they choose their own subjects or if they start learning other subjects. There is possibility that they loose their path cause immature students mostly try to choose easy subjects as they dosent like to make their life hectic and tasteless. If schools let them teach subjects which are really important for their future they can make their life and can be well settled in their coming time.there is some of are common language which are normally spoken in most countries,like as "English" .schools need to keep one language subject out of these multicultural languages. I am not from English speaking country but i have to write and speak in English cause i live in abroad and need to communicate with others .English is most common language which is uses in my country as well as in English countries.

To sum up,I would like to say schools must give preferences to their own subjects rather than foreign language's.however they should keep one or two language subjects in their syllabus cause those languages going to help some of the students.Who want to build up their carrier in abroad or in their own big cities.