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Sumary of Hiking the Inca Trail in The Andes Mountains



Aris05 31 / 22  
Aug 25, 2016   #1
Macchu Pichu is the ancient site in the Andes Mountains and tt was discoverd by archeologist in 1911. Macchu Pichu had been considered a sacred place for a long time. Although only few poeple is known about the activities that took place in that place, it seems that the function for obeserving the astronomy. The wonderful architecture and mystery of ancient culture attract thousand visitors throughout the world. They can access it by vehicle but hiking along Inca trail is the most populer track. Along the trip poeple can enjoy many marvels like magnificient orchids and birds. The trip has become so well-known since 2005. Eventually the government established the policy to protect natural environment and ruins. There are regulations about porters wage and the maximum of weight. It causes the price more higher. Therefore just a few visitors can access it but both of the environment and workers can be protected.

path83 2 / 1  
Aug 25, 2016   #2
hello Aris,

I suggest you put that name of Archaeologist to make sure because is general

cheers
rosadesiana 38 / 38  
Aug 25, 2016   #3
to avoid the repetition of Macchu Pichu at 2nd line you could replace with the tourist attraction or it.
few people could be replaced by small community.

it seems that the function isfor obeserving the astronomy

attract replaced with draw to give the variation in sentence

populer is in bahasa, the correct one is popular


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