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TED summary: How does my brain work?



fauziyahtami 22 / 36  
Sep 29, 2016   #1
When we park a car in the parking area then we walk into the mall and back, we have to remember where is the car. The hippocampus has memorizing responsibility. Brain made by a hundred billion neurons. Neurons communicate with each other by sending a signal. There is a brain research with rat, that shows the way brain remembers. Brain cells illustrated in the picture with colors. When a rat was put into the box and let move around to looking for food, cells show something like a fire sort but when the box expands the fire location are expanded. In a border puts into the box, fire sort will emerge at the location where the border. There are few cells consist boundary cells, place cells, grid cells, head-direction cells, visual imagery. All the cells are connected to make a pattern like a map. The brain will make a map of a place by exploring around. The brain will record every boundary, the more spacious a location the more fire sort are made. We could people to remember a way or place by walking around.

akbarmappiare 31 / 445  
Sep 29, 2016   #2
Hi Fauziyah..
These below are my thoughts towards your summary. Please, check it out..
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... parking area AND then we walk into the (...) to remember A LOCATION where isthe THAT car.
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There is a brain research with A rat, that shows SHOWING the way OF THE brain remembers TO REMEMBER. THE Brain cells illustratedin the picture with colors. When a THE rat was put into the box and let IT moveS around to looking for food, THE cells show something ...

but HOWEVER, when DISTANCE BETWEEN the box expands AND the fire location are expanded. In a border puts into the box, fire sort (...) where the border LOCATED. There are A few cells consistING THE boundary cells, place ...

The brain will make a THE map of a place ...
... every boundary, the more spacious a location ... We could people to COULD remember a way or ...


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