Summary TED 1Climate Crisis
Algore the speaker of TED talked about climate crisis to the audience in California. He urges the society to decrease the bad effects of climate crisis to save the earth. The climate crisis is actually climate collapse, where the causes are the increase of air pollution, inefficient energy utilization and improper usage of electricity. In point of fact, there are more air pollutions from the buildings than the vehicles. If there is no any action to compress the damage of every single factor, the energy of the earth will ease off. What actually the people can do to pull together to preserve this planet is reduce emission in home or vehicle, like buy green electricity and buy a hybrid, bike or others, be a green consumer and chose something with harsh less effect, and the easiest method is to become the catalyst and promote the steps to diminish the defection.
===> to make a good sentence, you need to use appositive.
eg. Algore, speaker of TEDtalk video, lecture an interesting topic regarding Climate crisis
society CONDUCT A CONCERTED EFFORT to decrease the
DIRE CONSEQUENCE of climate crisis to save the earth.
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urges ENCOURAGED the society to decrease the bad DETRIMENTAL effects of climate ...
... where the causes are
the AN increase of air pollution, ...
is HAS BEEN no any action to compress DEAL WITH the damage of every...
... to preserve this planet is
reduce REDUCING emissionS in home or vehicle, like buy PURCHASING green electricity and buy a hybrid, bike or others, be a green consumer and chose CHOOSING something with harsh less THE effect, and the easiest (...) and promote the steps to diminish the defection.
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