Unanswered [1] | Urgent [0]
  

Home / Writing Feedback   % width   Posts: 2


Article Summary : Facts of Laughter by Sophie Scott



ashelarisa48 36 / 47  
Aug 11, 2016   #1
Laughter is usually a spontaneous reaction we do when we look or listen something funny. It can change our mood from bad to good. Sophie Scott, one of TED's speakers has a pleasing way to explain some facts about laughter. Check this out!

#Fact 1 :
Based on a research, all mammals have ability to laugh. It had been investigated to primates and rats that feel a tigling sensation.

#Fact 2 :
What is going to happen to our body when laughing? It shows different reaction on respiratory organ while breathing, talking or laughing. Laughing makes slats and chest will contract more very regularly than breathing or talking. Every contraction of laughing produces unique sound and everyone has their own sound.

#Fact 3 :
There are many reasons that makes people laughing. Seeing someone doing something unusual, listening funny story or showing to somebody that we are really interested about what they say can be the reasons.

#Fact 4 :
Human can falsify a laughter. A fake laughter mostly appears in a formal situation that makes us having a polite attitude to respond some jokes. It also happen while we are actually not interested of someone's gag but try to appreciate it. Adults can distinguish the real or fake laughter better than children.

#Fact 5 :
Laughing is related to playing and interaction. We tend to laugh while we are with someone. In other word, we can not laugh alone because people will think we are crazy. Then laughing can also spread to other people and it gives cheerfulness on the atmosphere.

At the end, as the Old Indonesian Comedian Group, Warkop DKI said, LAUGH! BEFORE IT IS BANNED!

Related Video : ted.com/talks/sophie_scott_why_we_laugh

eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1170  
Aug 12, 2016   #2
The way you develop paragraphs is good, yet some changes need more improvement in particular paragraph development.

There are many reasons that makes people laughing. Seeing someone doing something unusual, listening funny story or showing to somebody that we are really interested about what they say can be the reasons.

It is believed that someone laughs through humours or something weird that they see. Those activities trigger other people to laugh as their specific brain mechanisms are responsible for laugh. As seen, we laugh because we feel like like it and because our brain makes us.

It is always good to write your paragraph at least with three sentences. This makes the paragraph stronger as it is well developed.

Hope this helps.


Home / Writing Feedback / Article Summary : Facts of Laughter by Sophie Scott
Do You Need
Academic Writing
or Editing Help?
Fill out one of these forms:

Graduate Writing / Editing:
GraduateWriter form ◳

Best Essay Service:
CustomPapers form ◳

Excellence in Editing:
Rose Editing ◳

AI-Paper Rewriting:
Robot Rewrite ◳

Academic AI Writer:
Custom AI Writer ◳