Article Summary: Groundbreaking New Study May have Identified the Cause of Crohn's Disease

A good news for at least 565.000 Americans who suffer chronic disease as Case Western Reserve University has announced a finding regarding a fungus identified as a common threat in patients' body. It might be a great step in order to find better treatments and a cure. This study compares the fungi and bacteria level in patients and found two bacteria namely Escherichia coli and Serratia marcescens and one fungus namely Candida tropicalis. The researchers explain "the presence of all three in the sick family members was significantly higher compared to their healthy relatives, suggesting that the bacteria and fungus interact in the intestines." However, even with this result of research, the researchers are still unable to specify the main precipitators and contributors of chronic disease since sharing diet and environment could affect, as well.

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in order to find better treatments and a cure
>> compound conjunction should be two same components. you noted treatments (plural) and a cure (singular)

The researchers explain[explained] "the presence of all three

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