Article Summary : Jayapura Residents struggle with recurrent blackouts

nda18 46 / 60

Nov 29, 2016 #1

Since November 2016, the capital city of Papua, Jayapura, has experienced day-to-day of 4 to 6 hours blackouts because they only had electricity storage gap up to 15 megawatts per day. This routine blackouts were prompted by several technical problems, affecting 110,000 households in Jayapura. Even though Papua have a hydro power turbine which has an electricity capacity of 2 x 10 MW in Orya Genyem, it cannot solve the routine blackouts problem due to issues with a numerous components.

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faizunaa17 49 / 66

Nov 30, 2016 #2

Hello nda, this is some advice from me:

Since November 2016, ~~the capital city of Papua, Jayapura,~~Jayapura, the capital city of Papua, has experienced (...) because they ~~only~~ SOLELY had electricity storage ...

1. In general, if you read many essay or article in English, you must mention the information before add some details that support your main information.

Jayapura ---> the main information
the capital city of Papua ---> details.

2. Only ----> A1 Word (too common). So, i recommend to change into "Solely" (uncommon) ---> C1 words to boost your IELTS Score.

Keep hard work !