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Article Summary : Monday's bright supermoon will be closest to Earth in 68 years


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Nov 15, 2016   #1
The article from newscientist.com explained about the special event that occurred on Monday Night, 14 November where the full moon would be the closest to the Earth. This phenomenon which occurred once in around 70-year period called a supermoon, means the moon was a bit bigger and brighter than it normally appears. A full moon happens when the sun, the Earth and the moon are all lined up in a row which is called a syzygy. When the full moon is at the point in its closest point to the Earth, supermoon occurs. This particular phenomenon, the supermoon, would be 356,511 kilometres from Earth - the closest it has come since 1984. Supermoons are approximately a third larger in area and 30 percent bright than the full moon in the furthest orbit. This phenomenon will occur again in 16 October and 14 December 2016.

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Nov 15, 2016   #2
Nurul, you will have to be careful about plagiarizing content in you summary. I caught a few cut and paste bits of information in your summary that were taken directly from the article. You did not bother to restate the information at all. This could cause a problem for you in an actual test because you are expected to produce your own interpretation of the information provided. The examiner will know if you wrote the material or not. Though you cannot cut and paste in the actual test, you can still copy the text and retype it. Please, be very careful. Always make sure that you compose an original thought or understanding of all the given information. The more I read your summary, the more I am convinced that you did not even try to create your own understanding for a major part of the summary. It is nice to know though, that you have the ability to pick out the most important information in the article for presentation in your paper. You just need to find your own voice so that you can effectively present your understanding of the information to the reader. I am sure you won't make that mistake again now that it has been pointed out to you.


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