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ARTICLE SUMMARY - Obama Congratulates Trump

Ucha MSN 17 / 26 4  
Nov 10, 2016   #1
Presidents Obama in his public speech conveyed an endorsement for the winner of current president's election. However, his expression was assumed that he actually hoped to a win for Clinton. At early Wednesday morning, Obama invited Trump to be in White House to hand ober the presidency tenure. He also said to Trump that they are in one team now; there are no democrats, republic, and patriot anymore. At the same time, Obama also congratulated his state secretary for being a great president candidate. Another aspect that Obama acknowledged was the campaign process especially when Trump gave his speech in front of citizens which was heartened by unifying nature and county needs.

Holt - / 7,528 2001  
Nov 10, 2016   #2
Sman, you misunderstood the reason for President Obama's invitation to Donald Trump to join him for breakfast at the White House. Yes, your information is lacking pertinent data so I decided to point that out to you. Now, to point out a mistake in your summary, he invited President - elect Trump to the White House, not to turn over the presidency, that doesn't happen until January 20, 2017, but rather, just to discuss publicly undisclosed information. Also, you need to capitalize the words "Democrat" and "Republican" because you are referring to the political parties in the American 2 party system. Those words are proper nouns and should be written following the rules for proper nouns.

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