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Summary an article: Polio back in Nigeria, still attacking African people


Fadhilahumar91 61 / 73 6  
Aug 21, 2016   #1
This is a summary based on an article in newscientist.com and written by Andy Coghland. The title of an article is Polio back in Nigeria two years after being wiped out In Africa. Polio is deceases that was attacking African people. After declaration Polio free in Africa, Nigeria was infected by Polio's viruses. Nigeria has been globally infected over 2012. The country has been more than 50 percent of all cases globally.

After two children was contaminated by polio's viruses, the country government has immunized every children rapidly and ensure that nothing child was infected before viruses replicated in children's body. Nigeria's Government and WHO make cooperation about eradication program. It aim to solve polio's virus contamination in people and rid of deceases. Based on globally cases, WHO has been predicted, if all people in the world will be free Polio deceases in 2019. After this case was published by Pakistan and Afghanistan. The Talliban has opposed to immunization program in both countries.

link: newscientist.com/article/2100902-polio-back-in-nigeria-two-years-after-being-wiped-out-in-africa/

Ilmi_03 47 / 69 11  
Aug 21, 2016   #2
Hi, Fadhilah :)
Here are some alternatives for your writing

The article entitled "Polio back in Nigeria two years after being wiped out in Africa" is authored by Andy Coghland. Polio is deceases that was attacking African people. After THE declaration OF Polio free in Africa, ...

Nigeria has been globally infected SINCE 2012. The country has been INFECTED more than 50 percent ...
ichanpants89 [Contributor] 16 / 777 309  
Aug 21, 2016   #3
Hi Fadhila, here's my analysis towards your article summary.

1st paragraph:
- The title of anthis article is "Polio back in Nigeria two years after being wiped out In Africa". (quotation marks needed)
- Polio is a diseasedeceases that wasis attacking African people.
- After the declaration of Polio-free in Africa, it is unfortunate that Nigeria iswas infected by Polio virus.
- TheThis country has been infected with more than 50 percent of all cases globally.

2nd paragraph:
- After two children waswere contaminated by polio virus , the country government has immunized everyall children rapidlyquickly and ensured that nothingnochildren were infected before viruses replicatedthe virus infecting children's bodies.

- Nigeria's Government and WHO make cooperationcooperated to create anabout eradication program.
- It aimaims to solve polio's viruscure polio virus contamination in people and get rid of the disease.
- Based on globallyglobal cases, WHO has been predicted thatif all people in the world will be freed from Polio deceasesdisease in 2019.
- ... and Afghanistan, Taliban has opposed tothe immunization program in both countries.

Hope this helps :)
dinartika19 37 / 67 6  
Aug 23, 2016   #4
Hi Fadhila !

This is a summary based on an article : This summary is based on

Polio is deceasesa diseasethat was attacking African people

After declaration Polio free in Africa : After Free Polio Declaration

government has immunized every children rapidly and ensureensured that nothing

Nigeria's Government and WHO make
made cooperation

Based on globallyglobal cases,

... by Pakistan and Afghanistan., The Talliban has opposed to immunization program in both countries.


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