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Summary : The September 30 Black Moon Explained



Sari Trisna 7 / 5  
Sep 29, 2016   #1
Nowadays, people is extremely interesting in all event relating to the moon such as harvest moons, super moons, total eclipses, etc. Because of lunar event draws people attention through photos in internet. On 30 September, people from Western hemisphere experienced another lunar name, black moon, that popularly explained as second new moon in a month. This happens because moon surface that is illuminated by sunlight stay away from the Earth. So, Moon side seen completely black shadow from Earth. Actually, It can not be watched like any other new moon. Black Moon will be seen from Eastern hemisphere on October 30. For people who live in East Asia, Japan, New Zealand, and Australia, could be seen on October 31, appropriate with Spooky day, Hallowen.

Dioba 68 / 97  
Sep 29, 2016   #2
After reading your summary,i have some advice,perhaps useful for you.
1.Nowadays , people is extremely interesting ... -----> Nowdays, people isextremely interesting(sometimes you can use fascinated or draw) in all event relating to the moon ...

2.This happened because ofthe moon surface that is ...
... black shadow from the Earth.
Yonathan 46 / 50  
Sep 29, 2016   #3
Hi Trisna
let me give you some advice...

Nowadays, people is extremely interesting(interested) in all event (...) such as harvest moons(moon) , super moons(moon) , total eclipses, etc.
... attention through photos in(on) internet.
... that popularly explained as (a) second new moon in a month.
So, Moon side(has) seen completely black ..
... appropriate with Spooky day, (the) Hallowen.

Thank you...


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