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Summary of article Technology: 'Brass rubbings' breathe life into architects' plans (ELISABETH GEAK)


Ifan21 22 / 24 2  
Sep 28, 2016   #1
Cutting-edge technology has been appiled for many perspective nowadays, particularly Computer-based working. Many convenient spesific sofwares embed and lounced to improve productivity. Architechture approach is one of common acccupations that use computer to elevate the productivity. Therefore, architecture researches have been persuing to develop and designed sophisticated softwere based on technique or requirement.

Recent progrmas which are being used have several problems regarding on picture display, one of those is rather stark picture sresult which is not suitable for brochure. According to Simon Schofield, a researcher at the Martin Centre for Architectural and Urban Studies at Cambridge, he explained that 'Architects hate presenting too 'real' an image to clients early on, because it suggests they have already made decisions.' an implementation of it, now he create a form of 'computerised brass rubbing' which is developed in order to change the skets into impressionist painting. It improve the quality display and provide architect many features. as result, the result become more attractive and more gergously intresting.
Yonathan 46 / 65 5  
Sep 28, 2016   #2
Hi Ifan
Let me give you some advice...

Cutting-edge technology has been appiled(applied) for many perspective (perspectives) nowadays, ...
Many convenient spesific (specific) sofwares (softwares) embed and lounced(launched) to improve productivity.(the) Architechture approach is one of common acccupations(occupations) that use computer to ...

Therefore, architecture researches (researchers) have been persuing(pursuing) to develop and designed s...

... more attractive and more gergously(gorgeously) intresting.

Many misspell word
You should double checked your summary
Thank you...
RAY93 35 / 186 136  
Sep 28, 2016   #3
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misspelling

'Architects hate presenting too 'real' an image to clients early ...

too many minor errors here. it might not change the meaning or ruin the readers understanding, but still it reduce the quality of your work. need to eliminate this kind of error for sure


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