Iqbal Quadir, as founder of Grameen Phone, a commercial telecom services company. In 1971, as a child who grew in Bangladesh, he had to walk half a day to another village to find the doctor and he was not there. Several years later he felt the same frustration while working at a New York bank as an investment banker, using floppy disks to share information during a computer network break down. Finally, he found an idea of both cases, connectivity is productivity. Partnering with microcredit pioneer Grameen Bank then he establishing Grameen Phone, a wireless operator now offering phone services to 80 million in rural Bangladeshi. There are three impact of phones, Quadir said. "They provide business opportunities, connect the village to the world, and generate over time a culture of entrepreneurship, which is crucial for any economic development."
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