Iqbal Quadir, as founder of Grameen Phone, a commercial telecom services company.there is no verb in this sentenceIqbal Quadir is a founder of Grameen Phone, ........ company.
In 1971, as a child who
in Bangladesh, (...) to another village in order
just for fail
... pioneer Grameen Bank then he
Grameen Phone, a wireless operatorthat
offering phone services to 80 million people
in rural Bangladesh.
There are three impact of phones,there are three beneficial effects of those phones,it is good that you inserted a quotation to strongly close or end your summary. however, you still need to concern about sentence structure and sense/function of your writing. keep writing and good luck