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Summary of Travelling in the Ancient Ruins in Peru.


path83 2 / 2  
Aug 25, 2016   #1
Standing in the high mountain in Peru, site Machu Piccu have drawed of prehistorical Incan civilization. Since Archeologist Hiram Bingham founded in 1911, Machu Picchu were famous of travelers. All the building of site built from hard stone precisely. The wonders building nearby city of Cuzco around thirty kilometers. In there the traveler can take transportation mode. The Inca trails of ruins still stand in Machu Piccu mount offer wonderful views; kinds of flowers and birds. The Inca trails were been tracking since late century when the Peruvian official institution pleased to tourist. To conserve Inca's culture, the government published a rule to put a half thousand every one day to guide in the trail. To sum up Inca's custom offered a luxury trip and memorable.
dinartika19 37 / 67 6  
Aug 25, 2016   #2
Hi Path!

site Machu Piccu : Machu Picusite

Since Archeologist Hiram Bingham foundedfound it in 1911

Machu Picchu werebecame famous ofamong travelers.

The wonderswonderful building nearby city of Cuzco isaround thirty kilometers.

In there the traveler can take transportation mode.several mode of transportation

Machu Piccu mount offers wonderful views
justivy03 - / 2,366 607  
Aug 25, 2016   #3
Hi Patta, below are my thoughts on your essay.

- Standing in the high mountains in Peru,
- sitethe Machu Picchu site
- have drawed ofdrawn prehistorical Incan civilization.
- werebecame famous ofwith travelers.
- All the building of site built from hard stoneThe buildings in the site is precisely made by hard stone .
- The wonders buildingare nearby the city of
- Cuzco at around thirty kilometers.
- In there theFrom the building, the traveler can
- take transportation mode .
- The Inca trails werehas been
- trackingattracting visitors since late century
- when the Peruvian official institution pleasedopened the site to tourist.
- To conserve the Inca's culture,
- the government published a rule to put a half a thousand
- every one day to guide into the the trail.
- To sum up, Inca's custom offered a luxury trip and definitely a memorable one .

There you have it Patta, I hope the above remarks and insights are helpful.
ashelarisa48 36 / 52 4  
Aug 25, 2016   #4
Hello, let me try to give some feedback. Here we go.

Since Archeologist Hiram Bingham founded found it in 1911,

Machu Picchu were famous of travelers. in the travelers' world.

All the building of site is built from out of hard stone precisely. (Check the collocation of 'build' in BBI dictionary, it can help you to find the appropriate words)

The wonders building nearby city of Cuzco ... => The wonderful building is close to the city of Cuzco around.......
(You need to add the main verb in this sentence because it does not have the main verb)

... offered a luxury trip and memorable a memorable experience.

Hope it helps..
Aris05 31 / 24 1  
Aug 25, 2016   #5
Hi path, let me give some feed for your essay

site Machu Piccu have draweddrawn of prehistorical Incan civilization

Since Archeologist Hiram Bingham foundedfound in 1911

The wonders building are nearby

That's it. I hope it can helpful


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