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TED Summary: The Truth about Lying



Fitri12 28 / 50  
Oct 5, 2016   #1
Speaking of trust, Pamela Meyer, an author of a book entitled Lie Spotting: Proven Techniques to Detect Deception, presented some truth about lying. According to her, truth number oneis lying is a cooperative act, that a liar has no power towards the utterance, this might affect someone when he/she agrees to believe. People are willing to give everything for whatever they are eager to. Thus, the best way to avoid deception is by recognizing the blind side and establishing appropriate preventions due to the fact that a good liar knows exactly how to trap the victims.

Truth number twois people are against lying but covertly for it, since lying is a part of humans' history. A person starts lying in a very early age. Babies tend to fake a cry only for looking attention, while a one-year old learns to conceal a bluff. Then, a five-year old is able to manipulate the situation by flattering whereas a nineteen-year old can be a master of cover-up. This is continuously happened until the end of the world because everyone makes mistakes and utilizes almost the same techniques for covering. As a quote by Donald Rumsfeld, a former Secretary of Defense of the United States says: "There are known unknowns. That is to say, we know there are some things we do not know, but there are also unknown unknowns, the ones we do not know we do not know."

Ifan21 22 / 12  
Oct 5, 2016   #2
Hey There
I am please to read this great essay, even so, i would like to give you some corrections, namely:

According to her, truth number oneis one, truth number one; lying is a cooperative act (2 times be verbs [is] ), that a liar ...
... and establishing appropriate preventions due to the fact that ... (Since this paragraph the next paragraph is the further explanation so it is better to combine it into one paragraph )

Truth numbertwo is people are against lying but covertly cover (Once two words are linked by Or/but/and it should be in same structure ) for it, since lying is ...

Pay attention for sentence coherency, miss spelling
Thanks
Hope it is useful
Best Regard
Ifan


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