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Article Summary: This Woman Might have Found a Deep-Fried Rat's Head in Her Popeyes Meal



Fitri12 28 / 50  
Sep 21, 2016   #1
That incident might be the most embarrassing moment for Popeyes, one of fast-food restaurants in New York City, when a woman named Rosemary Thomas posted photos to Facebook of what a rat head looks like in her daughter's fried chicken. She uploaded the pictures and wrote: "Friends and family, this is a meal Popeyes in Harlem served my daughter, my niece, and sister." She even asked other users to share the pictures of the disgusting dark gray object which has been fried deeply. In contrary to its real service condition, in fact, Popeyes is considered as a 5 rating ready-meal restaurant by department of health.

As response to the incident, Renee Kopowski, a spokeswoman for Popeyes, stated "When things are found they usually turn out to be chicken organs."

We don't think so!

Giansy11 18 / 30  
Sep 21, 2016   #2
Hi Fitry..
i'd like your topic, it was interesting, but lemme give you some corrections.

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... Thomas posted photos toin Facebook of what a rat head looks like in her daughter's fried chickena head of rat in her daughter's fried chicken

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