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Summary of the article written by Jennifer S. Holland related to pandas.



Iforsa 35 / 52  
Aug 15, 2016   #1
Summary 4 = Pandas get to know their wild side

nationalgeographic.com/magazine/2016/08/giant-pandas-wild-animals-national-parks/

The article written by Jennifer S. Holland relating to pandas get to know their wild side. Giant pandas as china native animals like other endangered species have tendency to decline extremely. Researcher conducted long observation since 1970 until 1980 to count this species. They concluded that the species dropped dramatically due to periodic natural die-off bamboo. In 1990, however, The rapid response by china government with creating breeding method success saves panda from extinction threat. According to Bifengxia Panda Base (BFX), the mouthpiece reported that amount 38 cubs born in china. Breeding method used by china authority lets cubs separating from their mothers, and getting 24/7 human care. Despite the fact that it is controversial method, researcher believes that it becomes effective method to boosts cub survival. Subsequently, cubs are trained for wild life by acquainting artificial environment. They placed a wide range of iconic wild environment to familiarize pandas about wild life.

dinartika19 37 / 66  
Aug 15, 2016   #2
Hai Ifrosa!

get to know => gets to know : because the subject is The article

simple past :

response = responsed
saves = saved

china => China

the fact that it is controversial method


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