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The table chart describes the use of trail, categorized by how many people use it



Abraham22 20 / 4  
Sep 29, 2015   #1
The table chart describes the use of trail, categorized by how many people use it, how far the destination of each passenger is, and how many tons carried away is in four developed countries in 2007. As seen, while Japan dominated all figures, USA witnessed the lowest figures except to cargo carried.

Regard to the highest figures, standing at 27, Japaneses were more likely to use trail as transportation more than other country in particular USA by figure at least 6. In addition, the distance travelled was further. Interestingly, the highest cargo also was shown by Japan, at 23,01 tons bigger than UK, USA, and Italy.

In terms to another country, it is clear that UK and Italy had relatively the same figures in all categories by solely 0.4 for usage of the trail, 10 kilometres in distance, and 0,3 tons of cargo. In contrast, USA showed the lowest figures for all categories with a great distance.


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vangiespen - / 4077  
Sep 29, 2015   #2
Aditya, The information you provided was quite good. The summary was clear. However, you are using the wrong term for the transport service. As per the chart you uploaded you are supposed to be talking about train or to use the other term, rail travel. Trail is a path to travel upon. There was nothing in the chart that mentioned anything about a trail. So change all references to train or rail travel instead. Now to address the grammar issues. Here is the corrected form:

THE USA witnessed the lowest figures except WHEN IT CAME to cargo carried.

Japaneses were - Japanese is already a plural form

more than ANY other country

by figure at least 6 - 6 what? indicate the measurement of distance.

In terms OF another country,

that THE UK and Italy had relatively the same figures in all categories by solely 0.4

THE USA showed


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