The table describes the number of cinema viewers for four type films in four different nationalities

The table describes the number of cinema viewers for four type films in four different nationality; India, Ireland, New Zealand, and Japan. It is measured by millions. Overall, in these countries, it can be seen that the figures of people who watch action films is higher than the other kinds of films. However, compared to the others, Indian is the biggest cinema viewers for most types of films.

The total of people who see horror films is only 15.8 millions. It is approximately half of people who watch action films, 29.9 millions. Furthermore, the number of comedy film viewers is almost same with romance film viewers. It is 19.9 millions for comedy films and 20.3 millions for romance films.

Next, more than 7 millions people view action films in each country. Moreover, the number of horror film viewers no more than 5 millions, except in Ireland. The quantity of Irish who view horror films is 6.4 million.

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"is" refers to "the figures", I think


Indian had the biggest number of cinema viewers...


Are you sure to the usage of this word? In bahasa, it is translated as "apalagi"


Start it with an additional phrase to make it cohesive with the previous paragraph. You may use "A more detailed look at the the graph reveals that ..."

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