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The tables give information about the temperatures and daylight hours in 4 cities during same week


Zarutopath 1 / -  
Nov 25, 2021   #1

Temperature and Daylight Hours


The two tables depict the temperatures and duration from sunrise to dusk in London, the UK, and Sydney, Australia, during the same week in the final month of the year 2018. Overall, it is clear that London and Britain were noticeably colder than the others, whereas Sydney, Australia witnessed much longer daylight hours.

According to the tables, it is apparent that regarding the temperatures of two urban areas, London and England had the joint-lowest max temperature, ranging between 9 and 13 units of temperature at its peak, and it plunges to 3 centigrade at its low each day. Moreover, the lion's share of the temperature of Sydney and Australia was substantially higher, with the maximum varying between 26-31 degrees and the minimum ranging from 17 to 19 centigrade. In contrast, the hottest day in Sydney and Australia was on Sunday, while Saturday was the hottest day in London and the United Kingdom.

As for the daylights period, the new day in Sydney and Australia came at 05:45 a.m except for Sunday when it began 1 minute later and was over between 20:06 and 20:07. However, London and the UK were the nations that received scant daylight hours, with the sun rising from 08:05 a.m to 08:06 a.m and setting at 15:59 each of the recorded days. Additionally, the last day of the week had the highest number of daylight hours in all cities.



Holt  Educational Consultant - / 11,948 3858  
Nov 26, 2021   #2
during the same week in the final month of the year

Make it clear that the measurement was done during the same year for the same last 3 days of the year. It is not the same week during the final month of that year. You need to clarify that statement because of the chart reference to specific dates. Name the dates in the summary. You can gloss over it in the body, but not in the summary.

temperatures of two urban areas

Please review the chart. There is no specification for 2 urban areas. Only country locations. Your information reference misleads the reader and will result in misinformation being delivered. Yes, it is tantamount to Fake News. Do not add references that will not be supported by a review of the image. Your information report has just become highly inaccurate in terms of meeting task requirements.


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