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Tai Lopez shared his experience how to be successful person



asmaraj96 9 / 11  
Nov 10, 2016   #1
TED Summary: Why I Read A Book A Day by Tai Lopez

Tai Lopez shared his experience how to be successful person. He suggests to the people to have plan for their future life about what they want to reach. People have to find the role model or mentor to guide them being success, which have ability to transfer their experience or knowledge. In addition, designing the life is one of the most important to pursuit the better future, for example, making plan what we will have done in 17 years-old, 22 years-old, and so forth. He said that every success person like Albert Einstein or Oprah Winfrey has mentor in their life so that having a mentor is better choice. Furthermore, he advised to divide 30% around people lower than ours and help the others to find their happiness, another 33% around people that have same level as us to become our friends, then 33% last around people that are higher than our level being our mentor.

Ucha MSN 17 / 22  
Nov 10, 2016   #2
He suggests SUGGESTED to the people to ...
People have NEED to find the A role model or mentor to (...), which have HAS ability to ...
In addition, designing the A GOOD life is one ...
Furthermore, he ALSO advised to divide 30% ...
Hujjatul19 45 / 64  
Nov 10, 2016   #3
Dear Asmaraj, Here is some suggestions for you

... experience how to be a successful person. He suggests to the people to have plan ...
PeopleThey have to find (...) being success, which havewho has ability to transfer ...

In addition, designing the life is one of the most important things to pursuit the better ...

Best Regards
Dioba 68 / 97  
Nov 10, 2016   #4
Hi, let me give several advice, perhaps useful for you.
1.He suggests to the people to ...----> suggested ( past)
2.designing the life --->design better life
3. ... is one of the most important (?) to pursuit the better future----> important stage


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