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How to take a good photograph? Chronological order - process Essay



MakubexD 2 / 7  
Aug 9, 2010   #1
How to take a good photograph

It seems like whatever you try, the pictures are just so plain.

Well, do not get crazy because there are three practical steps to take a good photograph.

First, you have to buy a decent camera that it's not the same to say to get an expensive one because mega pixels do not matter.

Third, paying attention to lighting and avoid the flash is very important...

To conclude, to take a nice picture of someone, you should find a place with plentiful indirect light such as rooms with lots of windows and set up your subject, step away from them as far as reasonable, zoom in, and click away.

Sorry, but I'm new in this forum so I don't know If I've put the message in the correct place

Thanks a lot

jelidtj 5 / 20  
Aug 9, 2010   #2
It seems like whatever you try, the pictures are just so plain

I think this should be a question but i'm not so sure.i would have put "Does it seem like, no matter what you try, the pictures always come out plain?"

Well, do not get crazy because there are three practical steps to take a good photograph

i would use frantic instead of crazy. and change 'take' to 'taking' :)

First, you have to buy a decent camera that it's not the same to say to get an expensive one because mega pixels do not matter

this sentence is confusing. you may want to split the sentence into two parts. like "First you have to buy a decent camera. This does not mean the camera will be expensive, because the number of mega pixels do not necessarily influence price" <<< something like that

Second Secondly, you have to focus on the person.

...you over-emphasize their nose and give the face an unfortunate a distorted shape.

If you are farther away you achieve a more even, normal looking picture because once you have settled on the subject and the light, you have to decide on the relative prominence of objects in the scene << not quite sure what this sentence is saying

Third, paying attention to lighting and avoid the flash is very important...

Thirdly , paying attention to lighting and avoiding the flash is very important...

Too much andor too little lighting make lighting makes it difficult...

A good scenario (i would say 'scene' instead; a scenario is an outline of a literary work) is in indirect natural light - for example, a sun-lit room without direct sunlight in the picture.

To conclude, to take a nice picture of someone, you should find a place with plentiful indirect light such as rooms with lots of windows and set up your subject, step away from them as far as reasonable, zoom in, and click away.

not liking this sentence at all :( not sure if i'm getting what you're saying here. However i'll rearrange it to the best of my ability. you can tell me if i've interpreted it wrongly.

"In conclusion, taking a good-quality picture of someone entails finding a place with plentiful indirect sunlight (such as rooms with a lot of windows) and setting up your object there. When you are ready, step away from as far as is reasonable, zoom in, and click away!

Generally, good try !! :)
hope this helps =]
EF_Kevin 8 / 13053  
Aug 10, 2010   #3
This is great! I like the energy of your intro.

First, you have to buy a decent camera. That does not mean you must get an expensive one, because mega pixels do not matter.

Resist the urge to let the higher mega pixel number sway your decision on what you buy.---- good advice!!

... and give the face an unfortunate shape. --- hahahahahah, very good writing here.

Okay, I found one line that seems to be taken word-for-word from photo.net
I did not see any other lines that seem unoriginal, but I need to delete the essay in case it is copied. Make sure you always rewrite every sentence that you find online, and do not ever take a sentence directly and include it in the essay!

If I am mistaken, I apologize!

:-)
OP MakubexD 2 / 7  
Aug 10, 2010   #4
Thanks a lot for all the answers!!

I'm not a native English speaker so I have some problems but thanks again


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