by and large, your writing is good, but i have several suggestions for you.
1. there are many countable nouns without adding neither any article nor pronoun. i will give you an obvious example.
Singers are growing up with their natural talent. As such, some people believe that certain talents like sports or musics are inheritable as these talents are given by parents through their genes. However, others argue that children can be trained to have a special talent as they are always doing exercises. Nevertheless, I would argue that humans are born with a special talent, but they need an exercise to sharp these talent.
you can find other article errors in different paragraphs.
2. lets analysis your diction!..
Some people are given a good voice. For this reason, people believe that they are born to be a singer. Take an american singer Taylor Swift
a singer from America as an example, (you have to add a dot instead of a comma) she has very beautiful voice and very talented in writing songs. As a result, it is very easy for her to reach success as all songs that she sings seem so impressive to be listened. Therefore, talent like a good voice is born naturally with human.
3. My point of view is that you have added too much "as". you have interpolated this word in virtually all paragraphs. you can replace that one with since or inasmuch as.
tonnes of thank,