Hello SHanafi, I just give a minor evaluation.
However, the advance of technology Newly invented technology helps people adversely in their daily living routine. It can be seen in the field of home living and office working. Long time ago, for instance, Indonesia people over decades Indonesian people spent around many hours with several steps to cook rice as their daily intake. It is different nowadays, with the betterment of technology, eatable rice can be served around 45 minutes with just one pressing in the Magic Jar. In any case, office using we can see in the public service. Recently, police officer needsmore than 10 minutes, while reporting robbery custody useswith the manual typing machine. What about if the case increases, how many times consumespend just for making a report, and how many time the officer need to arrest the criminals?the cops are conducting an investigation into the crime? . In helping of technological process, such as computer and handy talk, making a report and communicate doing communication with become easier, and the case can be solved quickly.
tremendous benefit stands more than it's drawback.
the benefit is outweigh drawback.
Overall, I get the point of view clearly and this writing has well organized.