Hi everyone,
I am preparing for Toefl Ibt. Please help me with the writing section.
Thanks.
Do you agree or disagree, "technologies has made people learning more quickly and efficiently".
I totally agree with the statement that technologies has made learning easier and efficient. I would put some reasons to support this statement in the following paragraphs.
With the help of technologies, students can gather information regarding any subject in a much easy manner. Previously, students have /has to search in the libraries or has to get information from the experienced or knowledgeable person about any topics. But now with the help of computers and the internet, a person can find accurate information within no time. By making the use of search engine in the computer, a student can learn and find information about anything. Furthermore, even the libraries are now dependent on computers. They provide an online catalogue facilities to the students to find the books and articles in an easier way without wasting time. Thus with this technology, learning will be interesting and easy.
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I totally agree with the statement that technologies had made learning easier and efficient. I would put some reasons to support this statement in the following paragraphs.
With the help of information technologies such as fiber communication, Personal computer and database, students can gather collect information regarding any subjects in much easier manner . Previously, to obtain knowledge in a topic , student had to search in the libraries or had to get information from ask for the experienced or knowledgeable person, both of them will cost lots of time.about any topics . But now with the help of computers and internet , a person can find more accurate information in a few minutes with a computer by within no time. By making the use of using search engine in the computer , a student can learn and find much more information in a new topic ,information about . actually, using searching engine such Google, yahoo had became a routine way to obtain information for student. Furthermore, even themore and more academic organizes provided high quality technique literature access service through online libraries or database, such as IEEE Xplore.They provide an online catalogue facilities to for the students to find the books and articles in an easier way without wasting time. Thus with this technology, learning will be interesting and easy obtain information became easier.
Nowadays technologies have changed the nature and pattern of learning. That means technologies had changed that previouslythe former way that student had to attend the traditional schools and lectures of the professor to get the knowledge. Compared to the multimedia education, using of projectors, audio and video tapes which provides the information vividly oldpatternparadigmbecomes highly was boring for the students. But technologies has made the way interesting manner.Moreover, As human mind can grasp the things more accurately by seeing themwatching and listening rather than only hearing. Therefore, this changes in pattern of learning help to create interest in learning.
In addition to this, furthermore, technologies have also made human more intellectual. With the invention of television, internet and so on .human mindpeople can collect information from various sources and think intellectuallyon particular subject form different views, that made think more intelligently . Games shows, scientific experiment programmers' were shown in the television make a person to think moreunderstands the abstract concept easier and more accurate . Therefore, it develops help a curiosity in a person to get more knowledge and provide them a chance to perform his thoughts more practically. Thus a person learn by actually performing things.
In conclusion, I would say that, technologies had made learning quicker with the internet and more convenient with tapes and cd's ,and much more conceptual with its practical performance.
Thanks vothiha, for your help. can you suggest some more points to be remember while essay writing.
Thanks rmli, great help, I will make use of such words in other essays.
rmli did a fine job on this! It is so nice that rmli spent so much time.
This is okay, too: Previously, students had to search in the libraries or has to get information from the an experienced or knowledgeable person. about any topics.
Oh, I see Vo Thi Ha did a great edit, too. I hope you will all look at the EF_Contributors page. You do great work.
I always recommend making the introduction and conclusions a little longer. They establish the main idea of the essay. They establish your real meaning.