Technology, the social life killer or saviour?

Im new to this, but heres my Thesis for my essay:

Technology is part of all of our daily lives. No matter what you do, cook or go to the store we all use technology. This may seem like a good thing, but technology is having a negative impact on society. From phones to computers these things are destroying our social network and the face-to-face connection between people.

I will be posting my entire essay either today or tomorrow
thanks

This is not a critique of your thesis.

You do know that your clothes is a type of technology, the chair you sit in, electricity. Everything we use that conveniences our life is technology...

Well, just so you know...

This is a critique ;D

I like your thesis, but it would better if in the last sentence, instead of "from phones to computers", you should include more different types of technology for comparison.

They are not destroying a social network. They are improving the communication capabilities in our social networks. But I know what you mean about destroying face-to-face communication.

Technology is part of all of our daily lives. ---I think you should add a few words to this sentence ot make it a little more meaningful.

No matter what you we do -- cook, work, or go to the store -- we all use technology.

:-)

Be willing to change the thesis statement after you write the body paragraphs. You should learn something while you read and write about the topic, and that will change the thesis statement.