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Today television is an important object which help people to connect each other from far places



ashkanboorboori 1 / -  
Dec 31, 2012   #1
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

I disagree with this. I think television is a good reason to connect members of each family because it can gather people in a same place, specific programs of television are important for people who have similar characteristic and it is device, which can make people to be able to connect with each other from far distance.

Historically, men like gather in a place and talk about themselves and their days and enjoy of being together, but Nowadays, with new technology make people far from each other for instance access to Internet make children who stay at their room and use their cells or computer to connect with other people and this circumstances make them far from their family, but as a usual we can find one or two device of television at every home and parents can use them as a reason to gather their family nearby each other, for instance they can put their television at their living room and use it as an object and sit near eat and enjoy of eating, speaking or talking together.

Many of friends who have similar interests, sometimes, arrange a meeting and decide to watch a movie or documentary together and after that, they talk about that film and this condition makes them near to one another and help them make a dig connection so TV is a reason, which help them to make a good and friendship.

Some program in television allows people to connect with officials and experts. They can talk about their individual problems or issues, which they see in the society, then they can use it as a good device that help them to connect people that they can see them in their real life or must cost a lot to visit them.

As a summary, television is an important objects in recent years which help people to connect each other from far or play an important rule to gather families or friends, therefore we can use it to have more beautiful and successful life.

dumi 1 / 6793  
Dec 31, 2012   #2
I disagree with this.

I guess you can have a more creative opening sentence. In the introduction, first try to introduce the topic to the reader. Then state your opinion. :)

I think television is a good reason to connect members of each family because it can gather people in a same place

This is a good sentence and you should have started with this :)

men like gather in a place

men like to gather in a place / men like gathering

with new technology make people far from each other for instance access to Internet make children

... this is very confusing :(

with new technology, people can keep in touch with others even if they live far apart.
lily2012 3 / 8  
Jan 1, 2013   #4
Personally, I think it depends on the type of progam and viewer. If this program meet everyone's taste, it cannot destroyed communication among your friends and family, whilst same topics become more and more various. Sport live streaming makes friends and family get together even in late-night. Those who are be crazy about fasion may spend leisure time together watching America's next top model TV show.
aqeel 8 / 25  
Jan 1, 2013   #5
Hi
When you want to write a essay, you have to begin with introduction.
for example
I have learned a lot things since I see the science program in the TV. some people believe that Television has destroyed communication among friends and family,but I ....
Qingye 3 / 5  
Jan 29, 2013   #6
Some program in television allows people to connect with officials and experts. They can talk about their individual problems or issues, which they see in the society, then they can use it as a good device that help them to connect people that they can see them in their real life or must cost a lot to visit them.

I think this viewpoint has no relation with the topic "Television has destroyed communication among friends and family "


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