In this essay, aA ccording to the statement, I will completelyfully agree that television has an enormous affecteffect on our day today life.
This sentence has several issues; grammar, punctuation, idea, presentation. This is my suggestion;
I strongly agree with this statement and believe that TV has an enormous effect on our day to day life.
TV affects our daily life / TV has an enormous effect on our daily life
Television is an entertainment activity which
distracteddistracts students from their studies.
.... this sentence you have written in past tense which is wrong because this is happening currently too.