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Think about something you want to add and try in the next 30 days



kiev 8 / 10  
Sep 27, 2016   #1
TED Summary - Try something new for 30 days by Matt Cutts

In this TED talk, Matt Cutts tried to share his joyful experiences about "try something new for 30 days challenges", inspired by American well-known Philosopher Morgan Spurlock. Matt's 30 days challenges has been ranging from simple tasks like took pictures, wrote novel to even bigger target such as climbed the highest mountain in Africa, Kilimanjaro. To start it, firstly, think about something you want to add in your life or things you want to try in the next 30 days. Another tips is, focus on a more small changes, based on his own experiences it would be more likely sustain compare to big changes. There are number of reasons why people should consider the challenge. For instance, time is much more memorable, self-confident improved, even be more adventurous like Matt did in Africa.

Cachaaaaaaaa 28 / 34  
Sep 27, 2016   #2
Hi, Kiev
Here I give some suggestions for you

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Fitri12 28 / 50  
Oct 1, 2016   #3
Hi Kiev, hopefully the followings input will help

TED Summary - Try something new for 30 days by Matt Cutts

In this TED talk ('this' refers to??, I don't think your first sentence is appropriate to begin your writing)

Matt's 30 days challenges has been ranging from simple tasks like ...
(maybe you want to write: Matt's 30 days-challenges has been ranging from simple tasks such as taking pictures, writing novel to even bigger target such as climbing the highest mountain in Africa, Kilimanjaro.)

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