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TED Summary: Try something new for 30 days


ibal28 20 / 30 5  
Sep 20, 2016   #1
What will you do in 30 days ahead?

Most people have no idea for this. To avoid repetitive actions, trying something new will be beneficial for them. This is a challenge. Matt Cutts as a speaker of TED talk did it every month, as well. He tries to challenge himself by taking a picture every day for a month. The aim is to find out what the new passion and be different from the days before.

The goal of this challenge is if we have made something new with a positive value that would change our bad habits, and decrease off our natural habit. There is nothing wrong with trying something crazy and unusual. However, this will be something very fun of our life. However, there are less likely to stick in our mind. So what are you waiting for? We just brave for doing something new and make sure that you have to try something positive effect for your life.

fadhilmd25 41 / 75 11  
Sep 21, 2016   #2
Dear Ibal28, here are some advices for your summary, feel free to correct me,

... something new will be beneficial for them. This is a challenge -->
To avoid repetitive action is by trying something new which quite challenging to do it

The goal of this challenge is if we have made something new ... -->
The goal of the challenge is to encourage to do something new with a positive value that would change our bad habits, and forget our negative habit

... there are less likely to stick in our mind. -->
Furthermore, this can brought fun to our life instead of just stick in our mind

Hope it helps you to improve your writing,

Regards


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