TOEFL: TRANSPORTION (subway is the most efficient and environmently friendly?)

Among all the means of transportion in the city, I think that subway is the most efficient and environmently friendly one.

For one reason,it is more efficient than bus so that we can save the time to enjoy breakfast and to have a break after we get to the workplace and before we begin to work.Sometimes it also more efficient than cars. Because there is no traffic jam. You know, in beijing, the subway can always be quicker than cars, because there are so many cars in the city.

For another, it is good for the environment, in stead of polluted to it. So, you know, choosing subway in stead of buses and cars will help to improve the atmosphere , and we can breathe less particulate.

So subway is good for our life and our health.

There is NO NEED to repeat 'TOEFL SPEAKING' in every thread title.

Can you elaborate more anout how Subway is more convenient than buses?
IN my opinion, actually, both are the same in comparision about convenience.
However, buses can still experience traffic jam, that's why subway maybe preferable.

Yang,

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actually Im not an expert and my english isnt very well

overall for the second question of toefl speaking which you should choose one topic then speak about it use these keywords then continue as I mentioned for answering the first question (develop your first sentence, make just 2 reasons and ...)

As far as I am an indoor/outdoor/introvert/extrovert type I prefer ...

In my opinion as far as I am personally concerned ...

I personally think at...

I favorite the idea of ...

I fully/firmly/strongly agree ...

I totally disagree ...

now, transportation

For another reason , it is goodgreat for the environment, in stead of polluted to it.??!!!

Sothese are the reasons why subway is goodthe best among other means of transportation for our life and our health.

instead of :

good : great, fantastic,...
very much: very often
happy: thrilling

To correct mistakes use I MEAN like:

she have... I mean she has...

use adj. and adv. as much as you can to support your view points.
use transitions as much as you can : besides,moreover,however,although,on top of that,...
nether... nor..., both... and...

for the end use:

thats all I can say about it.
for that matter...
these are the reasons why...
in that case...

use YOU KNOW as much as you can to make your speaking coherent.

and please dont answer your topics in my topic (MSc in natural gas).

here is my email if you need help for other types of toefl questions:

hosein.arya@gmail.com

sry my english is weak.