Hello, I am looking for comments towards my short essay about my educcational interests. Since I am an international applicant, I am answering the prompt for international students!
Prompt; In English, describe your educational interests and goals and what your plans are for when you return to your home country. Please include an explanation of why you would like to study the major you have selected. (600 characters maximum)
Being a third generation Korean immigrant born in Japan, I have learned to understand my Korean and Japanese heritage through the lenses of immigration. In the United States, more than 700,000 newcomers are said to immigrate from around the world each year; this create a diverse community I rarely see in Japan. By learning American Studies, I want to capture the cultural and ethnical heritage immigrants bring into the American society from the global perspective. With its renowned department, UM-Twin Cities will give me valuable opportunities to explore America in an interdisciplinary way. In the future, I will engage in teaching youth in Japan so that my country can become more tolerate community than ever.
Prompt; In English, describe your educational interests and goals and what your plans are for when you return to your home country. Please include an explanation of why you would like to study the major you have selected. (600 characters maximum)
Being a third generation Korean immigrant born in Japan, I have learned to understand my Korean and Japanese heritage through the lenses of immigration. In the United States, more than 700,000 newcomers are said to immigrate from around the world each year; this create a diverse community I rarely see in Japan. By learning American Studies, I want to capture the cultural and ethnical heritage immigrants bring into the American society from the global perspective. With its renowned department, UM-Twin Cities will give me valuable opportunities to explore America in an interdisciplinary way. In the future, I will engage in teaching youth in Japan so that my country can become more tolerate community than ever.