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IELTS; 'unique from other animals' - How life cycle of a frog?



Eva Novita Sari 47 / 67  
Apr 19, 2014   #1
The diagram shows how life cycle of a frog.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Answer:

The diagram gives information about the phases in the lives of frogs.
Generally, It can be clearly seen that, their life cycle encompasses the forms from eggs to mature frogs.

Firstly, the whole process starts when frogs mate on the land and it leads their females to lay eggs on the ponds. Then, frog's egg crack turn into small embryo that have a tiny body and slippery skin. Those embryo turn into small tadpoles living forms that have a tiny body and a long tail. That is followed by their development step which tadpole starts grow front leg break through.

Lastly, tadpole grow to turn into young frog that it has tail more short than previous and start of pulmonary breathing. Then, young frog turn into tadpole frog and throughout that phase they experience significant changes as their tails get shorter in addition to the emergence of the front limbs. After that, it turns into adult frog and it can live in the land.

To sum up, frog has life cycle that unique from other animals and frog can breathe in the water and in the shore because it has gill and lungs.


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ernhy 17 / 28  
Apr 19, 2014   #2
The diagram gives information about the phases in the lives of frogs.

you should write " in the live of frogs"
Pahan 1 / 1824  
Apr 19, 2014   #3
Firstly, the whole process starts when frogs mate on the land and it leads their females to lay eggs on the ponds.

Well, the mating part of the frogs not shown or indicated in the diagram. Do not write anything other than what your diagram has presented. This task is to assess your report writing skills and therefore your writing should strictly be limited to what the diagram has presented.

Then, frog's egg crack turn into small embryo that have a tiny body and slippery skin.

The eggs break releasing embryos into the water that have a tiny body with slippery skin.


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