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A university education should be provided free of charge to all the interested


dolly 12 / 32 1  
Feb 13, 2011   #1
Education is a channel to understand the real world better and whether this education should be provided to the students by the universities should be free or not, is one of the most debated topics over last many decades. In the today's fast growing civilization this education has become everyone's necessity to survive. Everyone understands the value of education in their lives; hence they compete hard to get the best of the education. So to give this education free to some students would be an injustice on the part of the others. Therefore, from my perspective education should not be given by the universities free of cost.

In my opinion, if the students will not pay for their education then who would pay for that, is a big question that requires an immediate solution. Thus it can create further confusions in the society. For example, if the government would pay for students' education then they will extract the money from public only by increasing the taxes and this can further complicate the situation.

Another reason is that to get education from good universities students usually take some kinds of loans, which I feel, make them more serious towards their studies and responsible so that they can clear the debts in future. Therefore, education received by giving money stands more value to them as they have sacrificed something to get that education.

The third reason is that the money universities take from the students is used by the universities for the upliftment of the university's standard only. The university utilize this money to pay the teachers, to introduce most recent advances in all the aspects of education like getting new equipments in laboratories, building new classes with more advanced technologies, new books for the libraries, new hostels etc.

Therefore , in my opinion universities should not provide education for free because the amount they get from the students is used for the welfare of the students only because it has been seen before also that universities that provide education for free are lower in standards compared to universities taking an appropriate amount of money from the students. I believe, that there is no good thing that we can get for free in the world.

s_maryam 5 / 14  
Feb 13, 2011   #2
Education is a channel to understand the real world better and whether this education should be provided to the students by the universities should be freefreely or not is one of the most debated topics over the last many decades.

Everyone understands the value of education in theirhis/herliveslife.H ence they compete hard to get the best of the education.

try more and check the grammer of anyword u use with a dictionary.At first it might take a while but believe me it works.

good luck Rakhi:)
EF_Susan - / 2,365 12  
Feb 21, 2011   #3
You wrote "should be" 2 times in that first sentence. It can be more efficient, like... Oh! I see that Maryam already fixed it... :-)

Okay, let's see what else...

So to give this education for free to some students would be an injustice on the part of the others.

In my opinion, i If the students will not pay for their education, then who would pay for it? That is a big question that requires an immediate solution. ----Well, if high quality education was free to all, it would be more difficult for the big financial interest groups to steal the nation away from the people. Educated people are harder to control, so I think there are some interest groups that would rather have everyone stay uneducated! :-)

Thus it can create further confusions confusion in the society. ---Confusion is not a word that needs an s. It is like water. You can have a little water or a lot of water, a little confusion or a lot of confusion.

For example, if the government would pay for students' education then they will extract the money from public only by increasing the taxes and this can further complicate the situation.---But if education is expensive, only the wealthy families can provide it to their children.

I believe, that there is no good thing that we can get for free in the world.---Great ending!! Your writing is very good and has just a few small errors.


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