The researches are reporting higher levels of both stress dan obesity, these report describe about not using our leisure time to our best advantage. Health specialist agree that the best way to rejuvenate body and mind is to spend time in nature and taking physical exercise at outdoor. Recent studies clarify that brain function weakens as a result of the energy expended simply classify the overwhelming influenced of city life. Around the world , the most papular way to spend pastime is wacthing television. Globally, the next most papular is browsing the internet, also passive, and its ranks as the most famous among the billions china. The third is shopping, which may little more active but is still as far from nature possible. Chilhood obesity and depression approtimate epidemic levels. Authorities have begun to declare the problem, and a brilliant programs that give children an occasion to spend time in nature are a being introduced in country around the world. Vocations are the most visible part of leisure time. British spend the most time go on an excursion in their national trust park.
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- to rejuvenate the body and mind is
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