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May 24, 2015   #1
Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In the present era when the technology is developing rapidly, there are many methods can be used to watch over anything done by people. For instance, cellular phone tracking and security cameras, and mostly people do not acknowledge of being watched over. I am convinced that such technology development and implementation, as a coin, also carries two sides with them.

Firstly, the spying activities are common for police or other state intelligence organisations. But of course it is their duty to get secret information to protect a country and its citizen. For example, the whole world wanted to find Bin Ladden and brought him to justice as he was proved to be responsible for terrorism a decade ago. All means of technology was used in order to trace his whereabouts. After some time, after endless CCTVs surveillance and with the benefit of other devices, the most wanted man in the world was captured and the world felt secure.

However, some people tend to oppose this monitoring over their activities. They feel that their precious privacy are disturbed and object with the thoughts of, say, their activities on the internet are captured or interfered by a particular party. People feel uncomfortable when they are under the assumptions that someone is peeking at their routines.

I certainly get the point of people who want to keep their privacy a sacred zone. However, I am even far more concerned about all of our safety. From my perspective, it is rationally acceptable to get a scratch on your skin in order to save a life.

justivy03 - / 2265  
May 24, 2015   #2
- In the present eradays ( "era" is a very outdated form of writing when referring to age and this is an IELTS task, you should maintain conversational as well as business english to make it through IELTS ) when the technology is developing rapidly,...

- For instance, cellular phone tracking and security cameras, and mostly people do not acknowledge of being watched over.

- FirstlyFirst , the spying activities are common for police or other state intelligence organisationsorganization .

- They feel that their precious privacy are disturbed and objectsubject with the thoughts of, say, their activities on the internet are captured or interfered by a particular party.

Indeed, privacy is important and technology has been way beyond its borders. Technology has advanced thousand times that we ever expected but the question is, what is our role in making this happen.

Answer, we let them into our private haven, we let them in by signing up, allowing them to locate us, flaunting pictures on social media, checking in at establishments and making them aware of our whereabouts.

In addition, we let technology overtake our rules in life, so the choice is ours to make. Life is always a matter of choice.

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