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THE VICE PRESIDENTIAL DEBATE WAS A LOT MORE FUN ON TWITTER



PHA2016 39 / 38  
Oct 5, 2016   #1
Twitter has taken apart of America vice presidential debate of the 2016. Two candidates, Tim Kaine and Mike Pence are debating to grab American's voters. Along session, Kaine interrupted a lot while Pence was calm. Americans who was attended in venue which it predict Pence sixty percent won as vice president. This debate was successful because twitter gave real-time power in US democracy. Mike Pence spent much time not defending Donald Trump whereas Pence was brought out and stand in Hillary Clintons' campaign. He has only need material to win the race. On the other hand, for Donald Trump, he promised to tweet his running debate yesterday and ensured that many journalists are able to watch his feed in twitter. In the end, the debate was over and the election will be postponed for more than a month.

Yonathan 46 / 50  
Oct 5, 2016   #2
Hi PHA
Let me give you some correction

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