TED VIDEO SUMMARY: THE POWER OF INTROVERTS BY SUSAN CAIN

Susan Cain as a lawyer and consultant presents both about extraverted and introverted people in society which has several differences in character whether in the school or in the workplace. At least one-third of the human are introverts and they have given huge contribution in social life even though some of those are underestimated by community. Eleanor Roosevelt, for instance, is commonly held as an example of a highly successful introvert person who gave a huge number of press conferences and she was also a United Nations delegate, a human rights activist, a teacher, and a lecture. On the other hand, extraverted people prefer to focus on the world outside the self in which they enjoy social interactions and are likely to be enthusiastic, verbal, and assertive. In short, it is fairly difficult to find a person with a strictly singular characteristic. Many individuals may be either introverts or extroverts, but generally a mix of both types of characteristics is found in a person.

Dear Asma, here are some advices for you, feel free to correct me

Susan Cain who works as a lawyer andas well as consultant

At least one-third of the human --> you can give a detail about it, such as one third of the human in the world or something

is commonly held became as an example

hope it helps you to improve your writing,

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Hi @Asma Raj

You have a good writing style. Though, there are some minor lapses in your essay.

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That will be all. Keep writing