Village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024 - Map - Task 1

The two maps illustrate the Bunborough village now and the proposal for its development in 2024.

Overall, it is expected to see some dramatic transformations in the future, including the introduction of transportation and accommodation facilities. A number of key additions include the construction of a new railway, the creation of new hotels, and the conversion of the fishing port. By contrast, some features are expected to remain unchanged, namely the shops and the beach.

By Autumn 2024, the village of Bunborough will see the construction of a new railroad line, facilitating transportation from the northeast to the southern area of the village. Intersecting with the railway, a new branch road will also be added, connecting the center of the village to the outskirts. While the fishing port will be replaced by the promenade, the adjacent beach will remain intact.

Despite the fact that the number of houses will not change significantly, some houses will be relocated to make way for the railway station. Additionally, two new hotels will be added next to the main road.

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This is an automatic failing TA score. Why? You totally misrepresented the given image. Yes, there were 2 illustrative maps provided. You got that right. What you got wrong was the time frame. These are both set in the past. Yet you did a full cut an paste of the time frame reference, without considering that 2024 was last year and not at present. So you automatically got a failing TA score in the preliminary portion.

The trending statement is in the wrong paragraph. That should be a part of the summary overview. The rest of this paragraph should have provided the content for what should have been the 2nd paragraph of the presentation. I have to stop the review at this point because the essay already received a final failing score.