IELTS-visiting foreign countries, visitors take advantage of learning the culture

QUESTION:
When visiting foreign countries, visitors should take full advantage of learning the culture and traditions of that country. How can they learn about the culture and traditions? Why do some visitors strive to learn about culture and traditions while other are not interested at all?

ANSWER:
Foreigners have more opportunity to visit other country with the help of wide transport facility and learn about culture and tradition. Some visitors voluntarily learn about the culture and their value while others oppose it. I feel that most of the visitors are interested about learning new culture and their custom.

People who are visiting other country can learn other country's culture and tradition by living in that country and making friendship with the people. Visiting other country's culture center they can learn about their culture and tradition. By visiting other country library and reading the books about their history and tradition help to acquire more knowledge.

Moreover, people can participate in arts and culture activities can learn easily and respect the other culture. It is very interesting for the foreigners to learn about other culture and tradition. By eating other country's food and asking about their cuisine style and their traditional food recipes is the best way to find what is important to them. By celebrating their festivals and ceremonies and asking question about their festival and ceremonies help to learn about their culture. Try to learn about their culture. Try to learn other country's language helps to learn about their tradition.

To conclude, I feel that visitors are very enthusiasm in learning new language which makes them more knowledgeable and they can get job opportunity if they learn their language and skills. It is beneficial and helps them to make deep relationship and friendship with the other country people. This makes everyone united and appreciates brotherhood and share love and affection with each other.

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My suggestion;
People travel for various reasons and tourism is one among the top most reasons for foreign travel. Many tourists make great efforts to learn about culture and traditions of the country they visit. There are various ways that they can experience foreign cultures and traditions. Interaction with locals, Visiting museums and places of historical value are two main ways that foreign visitors could gather such knowledge. However, some visitors are reluctant to explore cultures and traditions because they have different interests of visiting another country.

Hai Dev..

You have good points..but it is not well connected. Most importantly, the second part of the question is not answered...):

Tessy

People visit other countries for various reasons and they have the opportunity to learn about the cultures and traditions of these nations.


The above sentence is too long and confusing.. Kindly rephrase it.


People can easily learn about different cultures by participating in celebrations and cultural activities in foreign nations.

Your first paragraph is not very good. You need to focus more on presentation and grammar.

.... make two sentences;
People visit other countries for various reasons such as tourism, business, studies etc. Whatever the reason of visit, these visitors have valuable opportunities to learn about the culture and traditions of the country they visit.

I generally provide my suggestions for essay structure, vocabulary, grammar and presentation. But I thought I should contribute to this essay with a few ideas too :)


Well.... visiting museums, staying with a local family, visiting places of historical values/public places like markets etc., dining at local restaurants are some other ways of experience a foreign culture and traditions :)