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This chart shows a partial list of some of the species of birds can be seen in Woodchuck County during two different seasons: summer and winter.
In this list, there are eight kinds of birds reported. Three of the species listed-cardinals, crows and woodpeckers are observed in both winter and summer. It can be explained that they are the original birds in Woodchuck County, not be the migratory birds. Four of the species listed-blue birds, mockingbirds, orioles and vireos are discovered in only summer. This means that they are the migratory birds. In the summer, they migrate to Woodchuck for breeding seasons or avoiding the cold of winter. In the winter of Woodchuck, they move to the warmer region. That may be the reason why they can not be observed here in the winter. There is only juncos living here in the winter. Perhaps they adapted with the cold conditions during their evolution and the winter is the best season for them to inhabit.
Here is my writing:
This chart shows a partial list of some of the species of birds can be seen in Woodchuck County during two different seasons: summer and winter.
In this list, there are eight kinds of birds reported. Three of the species listed-cardinals, crows and woodpeckers are observed in both winter and summer. It can be explained that they are the original birds in Woodchuck County, not be the migratory birds. Four of the species listed-blue birds, mockingbirds, orioles and vireos are discovered in only summer. This means that they are the migratory birds. In the summer, they migrate to Woodchuck for breeding seasons or avoiding the cold of winter. In the winter of Woodchuck, they move to the warmer region. That may be the reason why they can not be observed here in the winter. There is only juncos living here in the winter. Perhaps they adapted with the cold conditions during their evolution and the winter is the best season for them to inhabit.
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