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Women's Place in Society; Are they still discriminated?


ningo 22 / 53 9  
Mar 15, 2013   #1
We all know that nowadays and in the past as well women have really important effects on several aspects of human's life. In the modern society, people's knowledge about the position between men and women has been changed particularly compared with that in 100 years ago. Although men's and women's position have evaluated equally in several cases, it still exists sexist discrimination in many cases.

First of all, the sexist distinction appears through the division labor in household chore. It is reported by Women magazine that there are 88% women have duties of doing household including washing, nursing, cooking, cleaning and no end of other chores while the only thing men do is watching TV, reading books or entertaining after their office time. And the thorny question is why the men don't do those routine jobs instead of women?

Another point of the difference between men and women is the distinction in their job. The fact is that various companies still hesitate or even refuse to recruit female employers for many reasons. For instances, a machinery construction company had denied taking female engineers with the reason that women can reduce the speed of working process when being pregnant or having babies. This is one of the reasons why women usually have less chances than men when looking for a job.

It may argue that women are also received special favors in some developed countries. However, in a variety of developing countries, women's benefits are not ensured. Many women have to dedicate their lives to serve other's profits or be under unbelievably control of the men. It is absolutely unfair with women in this up-to-date world.

Consequently, although women have played important roles in the history of social development, there still exists the difference between men's and women's position. Each individual in modern time should improve the knowledge and behave with men and women equally.

kamrul93 - / 1  
Mar 15, 2013   #2
can i have more information about this topic...
Amina amat arra - / 2  
Mar 16, 2013   #3
In the past, women`s placa was in the home. Merried women very rarely used to go to work. and few of them got top jobs.

But things have changed now. Today, 50 percent of women have jobs outside the home. Many merried women have some kind of paid work and thanks to supermarkets and convenience foods, women spend less time than their mothers and grandmothers did.
dumi 1 / 6,928 1592  
Mar 24, 2013   #4
We all know that nowadays and in the past as well women have really important effects on several aspects of human's life.

...this is pretty weak as your opening sentence :( .... It really does not reveal any meaningful idea to the reader. I think you should open your essay with a greater punch. Tell something more relevant to your essay, something that can arouse curiosity of the reader.

In the modern society, people's knowledgeperception about the position between men and women has been changed particularly compared with that in 100 years ago.

... it is the perception that has changed and not the knowledge; "perception" means how you view things!
In the modern society, the perception about women is quite different from the what it was in the past.

Although men's and women's position have evaluated equally in several cases, it still exists sexistgender discrimination in many cases.

Although some people claim that there is no gender discrimination and both genders are equal, still there instances where such discrimination exists in different forms.
Amina amat arra - / 2  
Mar 24, 2013   #5
Woman play an important role in human`s life. She is the cell of the the society. She is the teacher, a lawyer,a doctor, a cooker. Before any thing she is the mother.So what is the woaman place?

I think woman`s place is everything. I mean, she represents the community of a particular place. She interferes in the developement of the nation in several domains.


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