sport or art.
Use word replacements for these keywords. You should avoid using the same words as the original in your interpretation.
Wrong spelling - achieved (correct spelling), LR deduction.
Let me discuss both the points of view of this issue in the essay before coming to my ultimate standpoint.
Tell me what your ultimate stand point is for your personal thesis statement. Be direct. Repeating the instructions does not help direct the discussion in a clear way. Accomplish 3 things in relation to the TA:
- Restate 2 public points of view (2 accomplishments )
- state your point of view in relation to the discussion.
Okay, you explained both points of view in a general manner. Where is your personal - paragraph that represents the third discussion requirement? I don't read a reference to it. Expect your score to be non-passing due to the missing 3rd discussion element.Additionally, the 2nd public opinion lacks development when compared to the 1st. Always discuss the public opinions evenly.