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IELTS-Write a letter to your friend about a public event


redstone804 1 / -  
Sep 5, 2013   #1
Dear all, Please help my writing corrected at your convinence. thank you very much!

There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it. In your letter

- Describe the event.
- Say why you think he/she would be interested.
- Suggest an arrangement to meet there with him/her.

Hi Andron,
I hope this letter will find you well. It has been long to see you. I am glad to tell you that an electronic game exhibition will be held in the Redwood next month. I am sure that you will like it. If you are available then, I hope you can come.

The exhibition attracts more than fifty game producers who will release most up-to-date games raging from mini-cartoon leisure games to large-scale network games. What's more exciting, According to sales brochures, the top five game players in the world will be invited to perform and show their skills. I am sure that thousands of fans like you will throng into the exhibition center. So don't miss it.

The exhibition will be held on 12th April at sports center located near South station. I wonder if you could come two days in advance so we can travel around and meet some old friends here. Please call me and I will pick you up.

I will waiting for your reply.
Best regards.
David.

fahadbd 25 / 56 5  
Sep 6, 2013   #2
I am sure that you will like it. If you are free then,I hope you should come

Thank you
dumi 1 / 6,928 1592  
Sep 7, 2013   #3
It has been long to see you.

It has been along time that we not seen each other.

What's more exciting, According to sales brochures, top five game players in the world will be invited to perform and show their skills

What's more exciting? As per the brochures, the top five game players in the world are invited for this event to perform their talents and skills.


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